Once upon a time there was a Dinosaur in my backyard. It had a spotty head with spikes and fiery breath. It was a humongous T-Rex. It came in a big cage. When I unlocked the cage it kicked the football in the goal then it climbed up the slide and jumped over the fence. I ran aciros the driveway and I climbed over to get the dinosaur. When I finally caught the dinosaur i took it back to my home. Then me and my dad built a big cage for the dinosaur we gave the dinosaur sum food then he fell asleep when he woke up he did a big roar the dinosaur was hungry so i came out with sum dinosaur food when i went in side the dinosaur did a big roar so i came back and it was asleep i was in side playing with my toy dinosaurs when i heard a big snore but it was not the dinosaur it was a different dinosaur as it flew across the sky i chased it away because they wood fight so i did and it went as i went inside my sister was crying because her toy bear was broken so we went to bey a new one so we went my sisters got sum new toys i got sum dinosaur food and a squeaky toy it was time to go home when we got there the dinosaur was waking around when it saw the food it lent over the cage so i gave the dinosaur sum food then it walked around then it relaxed so we went in side me and my dad were playing football i kicked the ball over the fence so i went to go get it when i got the football i could hear the dinosaur when i got home dad was waiting for me i kicked the ball in the dinosaurs mouth and the dinosaur ate the football so we hat to bey a new one we got the new and we went back home and i played with my toy dinosaurs then i herd a big roar so i went to see the dinosaur it was just yawning so i went back inside and played with my dinosaur toys. Then me and my Dad played football outside with Isaac and Charlotte. Then we went to the dairy. We got the dinosaur 4 ice creams.
The End.
Saturday, April 4, 2020
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Hi Leo
ReplyDeleteWelcome to blogging and what a great first blog!
I love your dinosaur story. I love that your described the dinosaur and then continued heaps of details to keep your readers interested.
I would love to see a pic of your dinosaur so maybe your could draw one.
Here is a a great how to draw a T Rex video https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wgjaPWXqrlM
Give it a go if you are bored and then put it on your blog.
Hi Leo its Jack!
ReplyDeleteWOW that's a big story! I hope that T-Rex doesn't come to my house! :-)
Hi Leo
ReplyDeleteI agree with Mrs Simanu, what a great description of your dinosaur. Can't wait to see your drawing.
Miss Gill.
good job. Zoe
ReplyDeleteHi Leo, I loved reading your story because I had a dinosaur in my backyard today but it was my dad dressed up. I will write a blog about it and my mum put a video in facebook. I miss you because I can't see you at school. From Emilie
ReplyDeleteGreat job Leo. From Mila.
ReplyDeleteHi Leo,
ReplyDeleteGosh, you have done a lot of writing about a Dinosaur. I bet you and dad had to build a very big cage for him. What type of Dinosaur was he?
Hi Leo
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your dinosaur story! How cool to have a T-Rex to play football with. I wonder what the dinosaur food was and where you bought it? What flavour ice cream did the dinosaur like? Awesome writing!
Rachel.
hi Leo your story is grat from Indiana.
ReplyDeletegood job Leo
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